06-19-2008, 03:18 AM
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Rent-a-Jet
Probably the worst loops ever seen in a model but covered in red candy I think it came out pretty slick... This was done for a forum Leader Challenge over at EIAS CGTalk.
I felt in love with Silo and hope to find more tutorials to get rid of the bad modeling habits I started to develop. The boots and the Firefly's Serenity's tutorials helped me a lot. Modeled in Silo2 and a touch of FormZ and rendered in Electric Image Animation System. Feel free to critic all aspects (Model, lights, textures, composition) for I post to improve. Thanks. Rick Last edited by RichardJoly; 06-19-2008 at 03:20 AM. |
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06-19-2008, 03:38 AM
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Awesome work....
Render: Great reflections and nice deep blur too. loving the theme...its so jetsons old style.... ![]() Model: quite good.. ...i think you can add something under the sit looks empty to me.... Texture: no problem here... Lights: awesome work...nice lights goes with the back. 9.7/10 keep the hard work... |
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06-19-2008, 09:43 AM
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I really like the light, airy feel and the modelling style is very coherent.
Two little suggestions: I think the seam in the environment map needs fixing. I can see in the reflections where the clouds don't match up. Also, I would see what it looks like with a little more sky in the composition. It would make the sky be more of the composition, which would suite the theme.
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06-19-2008, 09:43 AM
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No crits from me, I love this piece! STYLIN'
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06-19-2008, 10:54 AM
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I just love it!, it's fun and funky. Can I have one in blue?:rolleyes:
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06-19-2008, 01:26 PM
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I love this one too!
Fun n Funky! |
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06-19-2008, 05:26 PM
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Good Stuff, Richard! :-)
Looks like something from the old Jetsons cartoon. |
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06-19-2008, 09:25 PM
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It looks even better! This makes the Jetson's seem almost primitive, uh... like a cartoon.
Great work Rick! |
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06-20-2008, 03:48 AM
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Thanks everyone for taking time to comment, I really appreciate.
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06-20-2008, 07:03 PM
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Very lovely style. I really like it.
Except the rearview mirrors and the "feet" of the vehicle. They look a bit too square/simple compared to the rest. keep it up Daniel |
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